Urgent Help Needed!

Hello fellow budding...or shall i say struggling...artists!

Ok so I need major help and i would REALLY appreciate ANY feedback so PLEASE LEAVE ME COMMENTS...i never get any feedback when I ask you guys something here. Anyway, I was pretty sure that my project was going fine because previously noone had critisized the paper quality or the "bloody" mess on the sidetable. It's been recommended I go to Staples and figure out what paper I need. Does anyone have any suggestions after seeing the framework on the wall? Glossy? Hard? Cardboard type? Framed? I want to know what you guys as the viewers want to see because it's hard for me to be critical of my own work. Moreover, since the side table idea has been scrapped can anyone suggest how I should present the literature? I have 4 essays due next week, excluding the one for this class, so any help/suggestions would be more than welcome.

P.S: Russel...let me know when you go I wanna tag along with you...

GOOD LUCK!!!